A New Story

So I've been working on a new story. I think I may have posted part of this before but I don't remember. Anyway, I've put this one on Fanfiction .net because I have such a hard time figuring out where to break the story so it fits on live journal. The story is called The Matter of Revenge Affair and it's a work in progress. I'd love any feedback you'd like to give me since it can only improve my writing.

Without further ado: The Matter of Revenge Affair

Someone wants revenge against Illya and is using his sister to get it.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4531306/1/